Creative Writing: A First Try at Limericks

I am testing out a new English curriculum this year for my two middle-schoolers; Charlotte Mason-themed Language Lessons for the Secondary Child, Volume 1.

Lesson #16 was about writing Limericks. Here are the results of their first shot –

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“Dinky Tumblina”, age 10, wrote:

There was a snake whose name was Jake.
He had a beautiful home on a lake.
His friend was a goat who had a boat.
And liked to float in his moat.
They ate cake and got a belly ache.

and “Ant”, age 12, wrote:

There once was a slimy old frog.
He lived in a grimy log.
He had a wonderful wife.
He liked his life,
Until he was attacked by a dog.

Okay, Ant, that ending is a bit disturbing…

About Janne

Christian. Domestic Diva. Mom of 10. Grandma of 1. Beach Bum. Disney Freak. Cat Person. Sunset Aficionado. Coffee Snob.

Comments

  1. I liked all of your children’s writing works. Please thank them for letting you post them. Please tell Dinky Thumblina that I especially liked here story. I look forward to reading her next story as well. ~Flybaby

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  2. Those are great; Ant’s was very funny. :-)

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